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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
In my heart there's a big cluttered attic, Holding treasures of every kind, Hiding precious memories, That are never too hard to find. Sometimes they get covered with dust, Or forgotten inside an old chest, Perhaps they've been buried for many years, But they always survive time's test. When I take the rusty, bent skeleton key And unlock that huge, aged door, The family and friends of yesterday, Come back into my life once more. They help clear the lacy cobwebs, And polish the tarnished brass, Wiping away the layers of dirt, From the cloudy looking glass. The dressmakers form in the corner, Comes to life in the blink of an eye, As moths filter out of the pockets, Of a jacket from days gone by. It may not appeal to many, This place where I reminisce, But to me it's a old-time paradise, Going back to those days that I miss. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh, I liked this poem, I love digging through old memories, makes you know how special everything in life is. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully nostalgic, Bonnie! Very lovely!! Denise |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
BSC--Oh, this is absolutely wonderful!! I really enjoyed reading this poem. Memories are a wonderful thing.....bringing the past into the present. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
BSC this is a wonderful poem. Memories can be such treasures. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A lovely trip into yesteryear -Thanks I enjoyed this a lot. Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
BSC, Oh such Precious memories, Just waiting to be reclaimed, Just wipe off dust and web, To rekindle their sweet flame! Thanks for the attic tour, now I must return to MY spring cleaning! LOL Dennis :^) |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I absolutely love this. The analogy is superb. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
BSC, I truly LOVED this. Reminiscing can be such a wonderful, peaceful and happy time. Cherished memories are things that no one can take from us. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem. "Those days that I miss".....yes those are precious memories. |
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