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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Our Love As I walked through the streets I muffled the thoughts Of our love And the joy it brought I thought we'd be together Forever in time Our love was special Straight out of a rhyme We floated on our cloud Like Romeo & Juliet Our love wasn't forbidden But it was one no one would soon forget You got in your car And decided to flee That's how I began My silent plee Now you're gone And I start to cry Why you? Why did you have to die? Maybe someday We'll be together again Me in your arms Maybe He'll forgive your sin. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very sad, Alicia. Nicely written. Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sorry about your loss...your love sounded beautiful. I hope you find another special someone to share your love with again. Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Alicia, Soooo sad, but beautifully from the heart. You will heal one day and then be ready to accept another love. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I am sorry Alicia. I wish you all good things. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very sad Alicia.....but looking at "Fair Warning...." I am sure you have what it takes...best wishes. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a sad poem! I am sorry for your loss... |
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