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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Do you believe I miss you? I'll try to prove I do, Do you believe the words I say? I'll show you that they're true. When I close my eyes to go to sleep, You invade my every thought, When in the arms of Morpheus, In every dream you're caught. In dreams of golden fields of corn, You're sitting on my knee, A picnic lunch of wine and cheese, All inhibition free. You ask my favourite colour, I tell you that it's blue, The colour of every sky, When spending time with you. So can you tell what's happening? Is it hap'ning to you too? Can I really feel your lips so soft? Am I really so brand new? |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is so sweet Cat. Everything seems more vital and vivid when ones in love. This is really a beautiful poem. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this is really lovely, I hope she feels it too.  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A poem of beauty. Great job! It is wonderous how everything around becomes so alluring when in love. dhuron |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
This is a very beautiful poem you've written, John. Ihope whoever this is directed towards feels the same way. "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yep I can feel the warmth. It's a nice feeling . Jon |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
John, Very beautiful. So full of love. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, John! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Thank you all for your kind words. In answer to your question...I'm not at all sure |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
I do believe I like this poem. John, your poems have a wonderful rhythm. ~Gene |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very nice John Really reads well. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
The sky is bluer, of that I am sure. Beautiful job ~Heather |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
You probably will never see this reply, but I wanted to reply nevertheless. I am NEVER in this forum anymore, don't have time for it. I haven't heard from you since just after Zachary was born, and I've been worried abotu you. Anyway, this is a wonderful, wonderful poem with an amazing expression of the love you share. Thank you so much for sharing it with everyone here, and I'm very sorry I missed it! Love always, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow....I love poetry like this!!!! Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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