Even shorter than a haiku!)

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Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15

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0 posted 2000-03-13 08:44 AM

We spring into summer
and fall into winter!

Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-03-13 11:35 AM

Brief, Bravo! Dennis :^)

Gene
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Colorado, USA

2 posted 2000-03-13 12:19 PM

This may not be in the traditional form, but it's very well put. So much said in so few words--and all 4 seasons. Great!

~Gene

Denise

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3 posted 2000-03-13 02:36 PM

Way to go, Ted!! This is great!!

Denise

Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02

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St. Petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-13 04:38 PM

This is great Ted. So much covered in 8 little words.

Sheila

...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

JOY 14
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Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2000-03-13 05:17 PM

So true, Ted. Cute!

Joy

Munda
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6 posted 2000-03-13 07:09 PM

You do have a way with words Ted.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-03-13 07:25 PM

Ted~
Adorable ... and well done.

For you -

Spring forward in time
Daylight savings soon to be
Daylight will linger

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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childomine
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since 2000-01-25

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st. petersburg, FL

8 posted 2000-03-13 08:11 PM

I can't top the other coments so I'll just say - this is cute Ted. A man of few words?

Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 331

9 posted 2000-03-14 06:52 AM

Thanks, all. It's just amazing what can happen if you shuffle words around in your head long enough. The pattern in those English words was always there, waiting, and I was lucky enough to be dealt it.

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

10 posted 2000-03-14 05:06 PM

Bravo! Bravo!

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

11 posted 2000-06-24 07:36 PM

this is so cute Ted..this definitely warrants a reply!!!

this is probably the shortest sweet poem i have read!

for you:
Winter falls~
How time flies~
Summer springs

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

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ireland

12 posted 2000-06-24 07:43 PM

and it is shorter than a haiku. clever.
I liked it alot

"I see myself as an intelligent, sensitive human, with the soul of a clown which forces me to blow it at the most important moments".
Jim Morrison

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-12-25 11:25 AM

yep!

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