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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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All these words From the hearts of many Together in verse Pen to paper Finger to key Prose so captivating Rhymes of thought Verse so free Structured haiku For all to read Straight from the heart Skipping across our brains Human words all do hold the key Thoughts of mystery So deeply true Poem is a creature Running so deep Happiness and joy Hurt and pain All intertwined Touching So moving Vivid and real Eloquently put Captivatingly sweet Intention to hold Elusive and free Thought provoking Giving of feelings Surrender to tears Powerful Expressive Lovely Intrusive Beautiful With all this stated Through Everything said Relating to everyone Across paper with pen Ones ode to the poem < !signature--> "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is wonderful, I love it. Felt like I had just unwrapped a beautiful present, thank you.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You, Dreamer!! Bridgette |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree, Bridgette, this is lovely! I received your email and I think this is a great poem for the Pub! Denise p.s. It's nice to finally see you! Lovely pic! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent!! An ode to odes A ballad about ballads An epic epic A sonnet to the sonnet. . . You get the idea!!! Great poem!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
That is the best view of poetry and prose that I've ever seen. Loved every line. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
That is the best view of poetry and prose that I've ever seen. Loved every line. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful poem, to the top of the page. Intention to hold Elusive and free Thought provoking Giving of feelings Surrender to tears everything poetry should be. I think you described the poem best in your own words.... Powerful Expressive Lovely Beautiful A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Denise...I'm glad you think my poem is great for the Pub and that my pic is lovely!!  Thank You so much, Sven!! I liked your little poem!!  kelieth, What a compliment, Thank You, bunches!!  Brian, Thank You for your thoughts, and for sending me to the TOP OF THE PAGE!!  This poem is a bit different from most of my others!! I am starting to get out of my comfort zone and try new things!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
eye-catching title, attracting this reader eager to read your poem lovely sentiments here...moi think you have expressed the different ways poetry can touch us very well indeed love "finger to key" cos these three words express how a good poem can open up our hearts like the metaphor of poem to a creature running deep cos isnt writing poetry difficult for us all?the stubborn words that refuse to form...Writer's Block...writing about the things that hurt...etclike the ending too...summed everything up so beautifully for you An Ode to the Verse Aspiring poet Immersed Searing pain Nursed a favor to ask of you: i have written a Poetry's Beauty Tanka in Open#8..will love your comments here since they work on the same lines thanx in advanceheres wishing you have success in trying out new styles!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You sooo much for your encouraging thoughts Kaile!!! And your welcome...I enjoyed reading your piece!!!!! Thanks again!!! Bridgette |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...lovely ode |
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