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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Traffic sounds, a whisper in the trees I realize that these are sounds of my loneliness tears crashing upon my hands heart tightened with restricting bands signs of my loneliness a soft sigh sounds so loud in the middle of a noisy crowd need feeds my loneliness wondering in my mind if love is truly blind distance increases my loneliness |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
I frequently forget how fortunate I am ,this brought it home PdV.......A painful picture indeed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad yet beautifully written! This is lovely! Denise |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Boy can I identify with this one, PdV. This is beautifully illustrated; a lot of deep meaning packed into a few words. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
*sigh* I know the feeling all too well--and believe me, sometimes I catch myself thinking that I'll never find the love I search for. But it's out there, and we will find it eventually...at least that's what ppl tell me! --Jamie  "I know I should have told you But I was so afraid you'd leave And now there's nothing left to say Well nothing that you'd believe I never meant to hurt you With the things I couldn't say I promise you tomorrow While denying you today..." by Stabbing Westward |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Sad, but beautiful. Those must be pretty big tears to crash like that. ~Gene |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another sad, yet beautiful poem deVine. |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
I feel the emptiness.....may something fill it for you soon. Sad, but beautiful. Sheilan |
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Jenni6478 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 11 |
everyone can relate to feeling lonely....it's a dark thing we all go through sometimes....it's nice to know you aren't the only one who feels that way...the poem is great....thanks for sharing it |
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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
It was very much how I feel sometimes... tears crashing was effective...the whole thing was short and to the point... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
sad, sad.  I had an image of you sitting in your car in the middle of traffic and just sitting there even when the light turned green, sitting and having the pain of lonliness hit you and you loose it and start to cry. I don't know what image you had when you wrote this, but that's what I thought of. Joy |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Loneliness can stab deeply, I know so well, as I'm sure most of us do. I sincerely hope your loneliness comes to an abrupt halt and someone fills your life to the brim. This is a beautiful piece and very poignant. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Some times it feels that you are outside a house looking in the window. As soon as you enter reality changes. I've felt that. You've captured this well Jon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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