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Hibiscus Winds

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-03-14 05:02 PM

fluttering
like hibiscus flowers

twisted like clothesline sheets
in spring winds
waving and stopping
air pregnant with storm's force

soon
silence

then

whoooosh

warm tropical winds blow
and clean the heavy winter air
leaving it scrubbed clean
squeaky
minty
fresh

renewed
as spring's fingers slowly clutch the earth
in gentle grasp
as winter
crawls away to hide
in a dark dank hole
til fall tires again next year
and winter wins a place
for awhile

Vivian Greene

~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

1 posted 2000-03-14 05:14 PM

"twisted like clothesline sheets" Such unique descriptions. Made this very enjoyable to read.

Joy

A very silly boy
Junior Member

since 2000-02-23

Posts 16

2 posted 2000-03-14 05:30 PM

A cliched reply, I know, but WOW!!!!

I love springtime too. A time of rebirth, a time of happiness rediscovered, a time of peace amid all the frantic activity.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-03-14 09:24 PM

This is a breath of fresh air!! Refreshing!

Denise

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-25 09:38 AM

gorgeous!

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