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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Red Dog’s Flying The rains came again got Eric and BB blues pumping out the speakers. Sippin coffee on the porch my baby next to me the rain, she be comin down. Thinking bout a summer eve tossing Red Dog empties from Nevada into California. Went up from Neon City to a valley named for sand best friends ranchin out there. Seem to remember howling at the mmon tossing empties into granola land taunting warrants and wanted. Must have been a dozen years ago feels like just the other day miss our friends more and more. My brother called last week his familiar voice laughing, welcome remembering a younger deed or two. Tossing empties into California watching those Red Dogs fly cool desert night perfect for howling. The rain, she be with us again half a world away from our family new blues curling around our mood. My baby and I share, sippin coffee chuckle and tear or two, remembering once upon... so very far away. the artist once upon... known as "bleeding" [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
good poem. thanks for sharing. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Daniel...those memories are priceless aren't they? ...and 'Alpha Dawg' is awesome!! Wow! You did a fantastic job on the CD, Daniel! Thanks also for that special gift that you enclosed. It's something that I will always cherish. My email is down or I would have emailed you personally. Thanks again! Love ya Denise |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very familar tone that you show in your poem. I enjoyed readnig this type of work. Will look for more. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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