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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-03-01 12:37 PM



Rosebuds Aflame
~*~
Aflame, rosebuds peak
blazing red, burst in full blooms
to greet warm sunshine


BloomingRose



© Copyright 2001 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-03-01 01:59 PM


Nicely done here.
I liked this!



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I admire it daily

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-03-01 02:46 PM


Oh, how wonderfully lovely!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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3 posted 2001-03-01 06:37 PM


Ah reminds me of spring, lovely Haiku

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


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4 posted 2001-03-02 08:48 PM


the title pulled me in and im glad it did...

do share more of your haiku or senryus...just love the form and am always eager to see a fellow haikuist's work

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2001-03-06 07:57 AM


Dopey~ Thanks!

ellie! Always... thank you

Moondust~ Me too, can hardly wait.

Kaile~ Thanks so much, glad you like this.


Panne447
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6 posted 2001-04-03 03:11 PM


Rose, Love warm sunshine and right now looking at my red roses doing what you wrote.   Panne
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7 posted 2001-04-03 07:24 PM


I could see these roses in my mind.  Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-04-04 01:16 AM


This is pretty, and I certainly would love to see that rose and that sunshine right now!  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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9 posted 2001-04-04 05:41 AM


Thank you for a lovely early morning image.
Melton

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10 posted 2001-04-05 04:47 PM



Wow - Beautiful!!

Take care,
Melissa~

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2001-04-05 09:42 PM


Panne, Betty Lou, Kscgrandma, Melton and Melissa~
I want to thank each one for the very kind comments and replys.  I have not been able to post or read poems as often as before. I have a lot of personal stuff going on right now, but hope to get back in the groove real soon.

Deb

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12 posted 2001-04-06 11:18 AM


I love images this one gave, nice job on it
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13 posted 2001-05-02 03:09 AM


ahhh absolutely lovely!  

Maree

kaile
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14 posted 2001-05-07 12:19 PM


i opened this topic, not realising that i have read it before

nevertheless, it was nice to read it again

~DreamChild~
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15 posted 2001-05-07 02:15 PM


great depiction of the beautiful rosebuds bloom. beautiful imagery. thanks.
BloomingRose
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16 posted 2001-05-07 06:19 PM


Thanks to everyone for your response to my poem. Seems we all love roses.
Thank you so much.  

Deb

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17 posted 2001-05-07 11:55 PM


Beautiful, if I had to pick a flower I couldn't live without it would be a rose.
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