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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-05-07 05:46 AM


I’m looking in, I’m looking out
I’m looking all about
I’m looking up, I’m looking down
I’m looking on the ground.

I see you, You see me
I see you, seeing me.
I stare at you, at me you stare.
Pretty ladies, you beware.

I turn left, you turn right,
I turn again, Am I all right?
I back away, I go my way.
Looking Good, to start the day.



© Copyright 2001 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2001-05-07 12:48 PM


sounds like my kind of song...
~DreamChild~
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2 posted 2001-05-07 02:04 PM


great poem, i can relate. i love the ladies, especially when they're "looking good",
and even more when they're "looking back".
thanks for a great read.

inot2B
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3 posted 2001-05-07 04:30 PM


Good grief, get away from the mirror.

Moon Dust
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4 posted 2001-05-07 08:02 PM


nice one

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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5 posted 2001-05-08 12:46 PM


Funny poem!  I enjoyed it.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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6 posted 2001-05-08 09:26 PM


Thanks for reading. Your comments reflect a lot.
Melton

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