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PortuguesePoet
Junior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 34

0 posted 2001-05-06 08:22 AM

Hope glistens where despair reigns,
A solitary spark
Amidst a sea of gloom.
It shines like a beacon
And glitters like a dream,
Where once none existed,
A promise has been born.
It becons me, come closer
And tells me not to cry,
The past is forgotten,
The future left to forge.
I lift my head in wonder,
The dawn is come anew,
The dark is finally breaking.
The morrow,
A new day!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-05-06 08:51 AM

...The past is forgotten,
The future left to forge.

I like it.
Melton

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-05-06 11:24 AM

THERE you go. That's better. Joyce

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2001-05-06 02:51 PM

a great read!
Anyone can identify with this poem at some point in life. you describe it so well.

                        Thanks!
                         ~DreamChild~

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

4 posted 2001-05-06 09:31 PM

Yes.. the other side of the coin. You write very well. I hope to see more of your poems.

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

5 posted 2001-05-09 08:37 PM

great job!!!!!
thanks for sharing
the other side

mistyrose~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-05-09 09:03 PM

Very nicely done!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-05-10 08:14 PM

Hope sees us through so many troubled times. Well written.

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

8 posted 2001-05-13 02:49 AM

Just exactly what my weary heart needed to hear....thank you

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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