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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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promising dreams now a fading memory beneath dull grey skies the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pgasus: Haunting and sad, sigh, but oh so ethereal! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahh. life goes on, Ellie..even for the lonely. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the dreams that are cast aside as one struggles to go through life...short and haunting  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Kaile, thanks.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this should get another round of comments |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
great haiku. so few words, so much expression. keep up the good work. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one. I loved it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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