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Despair.

PortuguesePoet
Junior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 34

0 posted 2001-05-06 08:20 AM

Despair,
Black, seething cauldron,
Where hope nonexistant
And joy but a faded dream.

Despair,
That blots out the sun
And covers the moon,
And turns dark my world.

Despair,
The forgotten nightmare,
The crouches in the shadows,
Waiting, its moment come.

Despair,
My final enemy,
My final doom!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-05-06 08:55 AM

Good lines. But, I like to Hope for the best.
Melton

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-05-06 11:22 AM

This is so desperate. God is still here!!! Joyce

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2001-05-06 02:54 PM

your thoughts are expressed in a manner of
simplicity. easily understood, and just as easy to relate to. great read.

~DreamChild~

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

4 posted 2001-05-06 09:28 PM

An excellent choice of words to describe the feeling. I really this but not the feeling.. of course.

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

5 posted 2001-05-09 01:35 AM

you have said it so well
good job
in doing so
everyone feels this at
some point
message conveyed

mistyrose~*

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