DreamChild: The Lover; P.4

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DreamChild: The Lover; P.4

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2001-05-08 03:29 PM

Open up the windows of
your heart and be set free.
Step outside, it's summertime,
so come and dance with me.

Dance with me in fields of roses
young and freshly bloomed
beside the grove of honeysuckle.
Smell the sweet perfume.

Sway with me to the songs of trees
and the symphony nature's made.
I'll rock you so gently here in my arms.
Hear the crickets serenade.

Kiss me beneath the falling shower
of radiant light from the moon
and let us hold tight
all through the night
til the end of this fantasy's tune.

DEDICATED TO AMANDA MOORE
~DreamChild~

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

1 posted 2001-05-08 03:54 PM

another great post. wow. i am amazed. continue on "romeo".

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

2 posted 2001-05-08 04:09 PM

i am sorry there are only 4 parts

but looking so forward to
watching for all your
posts now

how lovely to be able to love like this
and express it so well
as for me..i think i am going to "sway" for awhile

thanks again
for sharing

mistyrose~*

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-05-08 09:42 PM

What happens when all these girls start comparing poems?

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-05-08 10:56 PM

I'm with Trillium, how will it feel to be such a Casanova then? Good poetry though. Joyce

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

5 posted 2001-05-09 01:42 PM

You know, I'm not really sure how the girls would react should they compare the poems. I only hope they can understand that alot of thought and feeling are expressed in each one. They all are special to me, which is the significance of each individual poem. Thanks for your replies.

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