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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa ![]() |
hearts rapid beating a kaleidoscope of joy you are the chosen the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. Joyce |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wonderful! Brad Majors (Darksoul) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful, and so surreal... A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ooh, I really like this one Peg...you well captured the marvelous wildly spinning feelings of love. WO |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done on this one peg! I enjoyed it completely! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very cleverly done |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
another great haiku. i'm beginning to like haiku very much. |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Aww I like it ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Oh to be chosen, you catpured the moment well. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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