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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I want to scream and sound upset Make a scene and not seem obsessed But you won't even notice me Or look my way I'll not be mean, or too obscene Still you won't even notice me Or hear what I say You hurt? I hurt, simple truth The unseen in between The dirt, and simple truth Apologies and offered hand Ignoring me right where I stand Its not fair, forgive forget Your empty stare, and I'm upset I regret and want to reset But you stamp me like your burnt out cigarette And I really don't miss Your company, or any of that Your kisses and wishes Or any of that This is my face now look Guilty pardons, a dirty book Dessert gardens, Flowers replaced By what you've took The color of my face The peace within my space Feelings unseen but spilt All over the place This is the last time I'll ever say What I feel the bast I can Anyway It doesn't matter to me where you lay Just don't be cold and walk away I'm done, finished can't go on But you don't care |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The coldness in this poem can be felt by this reader. Some of us have the ability to punish without ever saying a word. You seem to have been punished enough for your crime. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
There does seem to be an unbridgeable chasm between you two. Just don't be hard on yourself. Joyce |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was wonderful bob!! Very well done. I felt every word of this. Hit me hard. Very enjoyable read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I feel the hurt in this poem  you've expressed it well  Maree |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
frustration, aggrivation, what a sense of indignation, hard core nitty gritty tell it like it is truth. write on! good poem! |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks everyone for posting responces!!! I can't believe I misspelled best!!! *d'oh!* |
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