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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-03 11:43 AM

May's grandeur displayed
With each new blossom and bloom
Sun beams approval

May flowers scent breeze
Butterflies float on fragrance
Dog rolls in the grass

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-03 11:55 AM

Very pretty. If I could only remake the calendar and make May twice as long, I'd do it. Joyce

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-05-03 12:41 PM

Excellent!

Melton

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-05-03 09:04 PM

A deux Haiku par excellence! ( of course I especially love the butterfly part)....

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-04 09:11 AM

I really enjoyed this. Very pleasant read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

5 posted 2001-05-05 03:15 PM

great imagery,
indeed, a pleasant read.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-05-05 08:21 PM

These were both good. I especially liked the "dog rolling in grass" I just watched my two doing that very thing.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-05-05 08:51 PM

Dennis~
I know that when I read your Haiku,
I am always inspired ...

May upon the lawn
New flower beds awaken
Pups really dig it !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-05-07 11:50 AM

nice images...

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2001-05-07 07:59 PM

Its not complete without the dog rolling in the grass, lovely haikus

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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