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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-04-28 12:33 PM


The pen of this poet-
Flows meticulously,

Beyond words-
Freely it lives,

The flow ceases-
In a  feathering breath.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-28 01:15 AM


I'm afraid if i had to write with a pen, I'd never write.  My pens always were scratchy and leaked.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-28 12:20 PM


wow

mistyrose~*

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3 posted 2001-04-28 04:27 PM


You are fortunate, indeed!

Betty Lou Hebert

Xeonox
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4 posted 2001-04-28 06:37 PM


I use a computer not a pen.  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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5 posted 2001-04-30 02:18 PM


You've penned a good one. Or did you keyboard-ed it?
Melton

Xeonox
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6 posted 2001-04-30 07:17 PM


I keyboard-it  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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7 posted 2001-05-01 11:56 AM


very nice..the power of the pen(or computer) remains supreme.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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8 posted 2001-05-07 12:25 PM


nice poem...am awed by your last line
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9 posted 2001-05-07 02:12 PM


the pen is mightier than the sword, indeed. and you portray exceeding might in your work.
Xeonox
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10 posted 2001-05-07 06:00 PM


thanks for the compliments people. I try my best to write the best.  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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