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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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Universal Language Tanka American I You were born in India In Japanese form I write of my love for you With language universal Hearts speak only love Sun and moon shine in all lands The essential we Cannot be divided by Unimportant differences. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
great message Marilyn..sweetly put. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is pretty. Now I have to look up Tanka. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marilyn, these are exquisitely lovely! I bet he loved them.."Unimportant differences"..I loved that! Love does transcend all! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Good work. Melton |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Marilyn...wonderful! I only wish I could write a Tanka oh so well!  ~~Jamie   I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Marilyn, oh so very nice...lovely thoughts. -wordancer |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Pegasus - Thanks. It is a sweet feeling.Joyce - I'm sure you will do very well with it. Thank you. Ellie - I just love your "exquisites"! I don't know what he thought, but hope to find out.  Melton - Thank you. Jamie - Thank you. You write just beautifully.Wordancer - Thank you. I'm pleased to be approved by the expert. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Marilyn, you're really rolling. I like this sytle, too. hmmmm..... "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful tanka about your sweetie. very sweet!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Billy - Thank you. I'm (hopefully) coming off a dry spell. Give tanka try. You'll like it.Javier - Thanks. You're pretty sweet yourself.To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful sentiments here...i dig your idea and am racking my brains to write a tanka so as to match this gem... hope life is well, kaile |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
a powerful word on the universal language that breaks all barriers of difference- Love. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yeah so nice Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Marilyn! So true, so true! |
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