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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-04-28 04:40 PM


You came in spring when I was free
To let you weave your sorcery.
All through the summer, hot and long,
I listened to your siren song
And on into a splendid fall,
I answered to your every call.
Then winter came and where were you
Just when I needed someone who
Would help we weather winter sights
Of shorter days and darker nights?
Of wind and storms, of ice and snow
And temperatures that plunged below
The freezing mark.  But I came through
Quite nicely, with no thanks to you.
If you return to find me where
I was before, then best beware!
I'll not be fooled again that way
And I will never let you stay,
But yet I must admit that I
Will keep your memory till I die!


Betty Lou Hebert

Published on The Poetic Link, June 2000

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 04-28-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-28 04:51 PM


A warm weather friend?  That has happened to all of us.  This is a good poem as usual.  Its nice to see more poems in this corner.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-29 02:52 AM


Great poem. It kinda relates to one of my poem. Again great work, enjoy reading it. But next time be a little bit more simple.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Trillium
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3 posted 2001-04-29 02:34 PM


Joyce and Xeonox:  Thank you both for commenting.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-05-01 11:36 AM


we have all been there Betty Lou..great piece, well formed and flows soooo nice..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2001-05-02 12:56 PM


Thanks Pegasus.

Betty Lou Hebert

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