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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Arms to my knees head in my hands crystalized by fear I shuddered once and by the grain slipped to the floor as sand One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, I wonder waht frightened you. Impressive. Joyce |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
ooh! Neat! Nicely done. I like it, whatever it is. /:-}== |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
What great words you have used. I enjoyed every line of your lovely and wonderful poem. I will be looking for more in the future. Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.) |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Ah, the brevity of this makes it, the dissolution of self for whatever reason. WO |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Petite and poignant. I love it.  "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hmmm...A knock upon the door, but who was there is here no more. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
It's not fair to set the scene and not tell us who or what entered! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Thanks all for taking the time to read. For those who wondered...this was written about a sensation i experienced during a time of prolonged stress and dread...like shaking so fast that you become frozen and at the slightest shudder...... One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how did i ever miss you? i have a preference for short poems and you write them just fine! |
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