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PortuguesePoet
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 34


0 posted 2001-05-01 10:26 AM



Oh to see it bloom,
With the smell of early morningdew.
Slowly it grows,
From seed to flower,
The passage of time,
Its nuturing mother.

In the whisper of the wind
And the echo of silence,
The lonliness abating,
The love is reflowering,
The ashes of the past,
The flower of the future.


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Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
1 posted 2001-05-01 10:38 AM


I read both of your poems and I think they're both very beautiful!  I hope to enjoy more of your writing posted here in the future, I don't always comment, but read lots!
Welcome to Passions!
Debbie

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-05-01 12:10 PM


This is very pretty too.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-05-01 06:09 PM


Exquisitely lovely....

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 88
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4 posted 2001-05-01 06:27 PM


Very good work,I enjoyed it!
Brenda H.

The windows of the soul,reflect negative and positive images.Correct the negative and praise the positive

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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5 posted 2001-05-02 01:03 AM


Very enjoyable to read.  Hope you like this site and we get to see more of your work.
Welcome!

Betty Lou Hebert

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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6 posted 2001-05-02 02:28 AM


Lovely  
most enjoyed.


Maree

Songbird
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Missouri
7 posted 2001-05-06 09:37 PM


Very nice. Going now to read more of your poems.
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
8 posted 2001-05-07 02:26 PM


a subliminal reminder of a hopeful tomorrow?
great post! thanks.

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