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One More Mile

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2001-04-19 09:23 PM

I need you,
By my side,
Life without you,
Is kinda dull,

I need you,
Throughout life,
What will life be,
Without you by my side,

I need you,
but if we were to,
choose different paths,
Then just give me one more mile.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

[This message has been edited by Moon Dust (edited 04-20-2001).]

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-04-19 10:01 PM

this was a nice read. you might want to change the second line in the third stanza. seems to be a word missing or is it just me?

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2001-04-20 01:21 PM

I didnt see that thanks for pointing that out

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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