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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-04-19 08:58 PM


Is it me?
Or has the world changed,
sure enough when i got out of bed,
Checked the window,
Everthing seemed the same,

Is it me?
I don't feel like me,
Checked the mirror,
Everything seemed same,

Is it me?
I'm living a dream,
Checked I werent dreaming,
Everythings changed.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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Yu Lan
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1 posted 2001-04-22 07:36 PM


well. This is an interesting piece.. kinda reflecting on what was.. I like it, almost haunting really, and I've felt like this often.. Enjoyed muchly..
-Lynne

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2 posted 2001-04-22 08:27 PM


This is an intriguing read.
Melton

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3 posted 2001-04-23 06:40 PM


I guess we all have a sense of unreality at times.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-04-23 08:19 PM


yeah, only when your going though changes its like it goes on though a pierod of time till you finally relise what you want. And when you do only then can you cope with the change. Just a new insight guys. Thanks alll of you.  

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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