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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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smooth struts gliding down the smoky neon streets with a light one-two one-two left right twirl left with slight slouch smoochin asphalt goddess of night-light city Alicat, groovin to Dance of the Dream Man |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is a cool, smooth, gliding write which pulls me in and takes me for a lyrical ride.... and i think i hear the soundtrack!!! i DO, i DO!!! wonderful verse to illustrate an excellent song.... very well done, my friend  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is SMOOTH!!!! Has a pink panther aura about it Ali! Applause...no, wait-- "snaps" instead!  |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
This is cool, Alicat. Rather Beatnik, Coffeehouse, East Village, Early Sixties, On The Road, Style. Liked it muchly, man. (snap,snap) "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cool poem...very nice images.... pretty cat..walking down the street...:P |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
See the nice policeman on the corner watching you. He's wondering is it Fred Astair reincarnated or just a guy who's trying not to fall after one to many drinks. Loved the imagery!! |
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