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Wikket
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0 posted 2001-04-03 07:32 PM



She goes there everyday
To see the wonderful world
Dwindling away their hours
In a sea of blistered walls

She has a spark
Her eyes as bright as the sun
Thinking she has a purpose
Wanting to prove herself

But they straighten her out
They tell her who's boss
She knows she makes no rules
Their words are gold

Now she is very tired
Her figure is hunched over
Glistening eyes somehow vacant
Her smile a distant memory

In her world there is no perfect
The song is not so sweet
The vultures fly in a circle
A distant song is heard

The melody a tale of happiness
Of making a place in this world
Succeeding where most have failed
Walking in the forbiddon zone

No, it is not worth it
Her ears tune out the song
Life is not that way
Only they have a world

So she sits at her lonely desk
Counting away the hours
Wondering when it will be
Time to go home

I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

© Copyright 2001 Jamie Carlson - All Rights Reserved
coyote
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1 posted 2001-04-03 07:46 PM


Corporate America.
Don't ya just love it?
"The smell of (placated productivity) in the morning. I love it. It smells like victory."
Or was that napalm?????
You don't work for the Postal Service, do ya?
he he, just kidding  
Very good read, Wikket.
Been in Machiavelli's world for 27 years now, it only gets more absurd.
I hear ya.
Thanks.  

"The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know."
Harry S. Truman

laryalee
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2 posted 2001-04-03 07:59 PM


You hooked me on this one, Wikket!
Wasn't quite sure where it was heading...
Makes one ponder 'the good old days'....at least everyone knew where they belonged!
Enjoyed!
Lary

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-04-03 09:46 PM


Oh, oh.  Everyone should have a job they love.  Life's too short.  Love, Joyce
Wikket
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4 posted 2001-04-04 08:59 AM


coyote:  hehehe  Don't I know it!  You ever just had one of those days where you want to just go home.     Whoops!  That's everyday for me!  Thanks for your comment!
P.S.  No I don't work for the Post Office, but it is a government job...  

laryalee:  So true, so true.  Seems all we have now is more to whine about and more to do.  I thought technology was supposed to make things easier!!! *rofl*  Thanks for taking the time to comment!  

Joyce:  No kidding!     I am just waiting for the day when I get to be a casual CIVILIAN student again!     Thanks for your comment!  

~~Jamie         

I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

kcsgrandma
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5 posted 2001-04-04 05:33 PM


Hi, Jamie!  Boy can I identify with this!  I suppose most of us can. Fortunately, there are some days that are pretty good, too. Hope you have one soon.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Wikket
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6 posted 2001-04-09 06:09 PM


kcsgrandma:  Well thank you...I hope so as well!  Thank you for your kind comment!  

~~Jamie     

I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

Solstice Son
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7 posted 2001-04-13 01:18 PM


mmmm..I haven't been here in so long...tis good to see you still do great stuff hun..loved it  

Sol

~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

Wikket
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8 posted 2001-04-14 12:23 PM


Sol:  Well, good to see you again stranger!  Yeah...I still exist, go figure?!     Anyways, stop in and have a brew sometime...we all miss our little Solstice Son!  Thanks for your comment!  

~~Jamie  

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..."  --Ozzy

kaile
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9 posted 2001-04-19 06:51 AM


yes, yes, to have worked so hard only to stumble into the harsh realitites of life...it does get frustrating, yup??

thought-provoking read

Wikket
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10 posted 2001-04-19 09:33 AM


faterider:  Thank you for taking the time to comment on this one.  I keep dreaming about that someday, when I can have the job I would like!  But I guess this dream is not possible due to the fact that it will still be work!     Thanks again!

~~Jamie      

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..."  --Ozzy

coyote
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11 posted 2001-04-20 10:47 PM


Aye, Wikket.
Words of wisdom for sure.
"Work is the curse of the drinking classes".
And even those who don't indulge are cursed nonetheless.  

"I know that I am like the rain. There but for the grace of you go I."
Paul Simon-Kathy's Song

[This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-20-2001).]

Dopey Dope
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12 posted 2001-04-21 12:34 PM


Nicely done here. I enjoyed the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Wikket
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13 posted 2001-04-23 03:37 PM


coyote:  Yes Yes...enough to drive you batty!     That's okay though...I mean if it weren't for the doldrum of work, you wouldn't be able to look forward to retirement!!!!   Thanks for your comment.

Dopey Dope:  Thanks for taking the time to read it!  

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..."  --Ozzy

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