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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-03-29 11:55 PM


I sit here alone,
At the strike of midnight,
I decide to write,

Words make no sense,
When you have to sleep,
But something in my brain is bound to leap,

Scribbling some nonsense,
I pretend to write,
You know what?
I rather be out,
Flying my old kite,

I must stop
Before it gets worse,
The writers block with it I am cursed,

Would you look,
The hand is past twelve,
It signals something,
But I can’t quite tell.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-03-30 12:17 PM


xeonox, I have felt this way many times and stil lam lately, my muse has taken a holiday me thinks  

Enjoyed the read  

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-30-2001).]

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2001-03-30 01:10 AM


Maybe there's a muse convention on? Mine's been on leave, too. I think we've all been through this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-03-30 02:13 AM


It's just a quarter after eleven here, but I know I can't create at this hour.  We'll all try again tomorrow.  Joyce
Suzanne Arlene
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4 posted 2001-03-30 06:45 AM


I agree with Joyce. Tomorrow sounds good to me  Suzanne
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