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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2001-03-28 07:42 PM


Weirdness

Floating in outside orbit
watching the inner twirl.
Sipping a bit of celestial nectar
longing for, ever looking, watching...

Outside looking in
inside looking out
does it ever really change?
Comets tail lighting
battle royale lightning
does one ever...i,i,i?

Slipping in a sun burst
catching, then dodging rays.
Another dose of iced moonbeam
longing for, ever searching, maybe?

Singing some solitary sonnet
choir choking with silent voice
does it ever really change?
Laughing with maniacal forgetfulness
generations study the spittle
does one ever...i,i,i?
strange enough?

the artist once upon...
known as "bleeding"

© Copyright 2001 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
1 posted 2001-03-29 07:29 AM


strange enough?  

Nope, made me rather feel like slipping on my ruby-red dancing slippers and go for a spin among churning galaxies. I loved the stanza with the iced moonbeams, what a thought!

You well captured the strange feeling that we are our own universe as we obit in our own paths...oh, too early for these strange but familiar thoughts.  I'm out of here!

-wordancer

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