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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
Tis Eventide When waning setting sun descends, doth fullest golden moon arise. Imaginings take starry flight, with moonglow dreams of lovers dawn. So here in these imagined dreams, a Sonata of the heart is sung, to one who knows not how he's loved. Secretly in Eventide, I can tell him so. Tis then a kiss, combined of tears, that flow of joy at last as one. For these two in their middle days, have now just found soulmate true, and know a love as not before. Pray God this dream may soon arise, as Eventides sweet song becomes, a duet Sonata sung as one. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Ellie..once again you have written a lovely one. A joy to read.. Love Jos Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awww was sorry when I came to the end, I wanted more ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Ellie. The longing of the heart comes through beautifully! |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ellie, this was so beautiful and haunting, such a joy to read. -wordancer "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Ellie, this is indeed beautiful, as I have already told you. ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Ellie, sigh, this is beautiful. ![]() Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah, this pulls the heartstrings Ellie, a hauntingly beautiful piece indeed. See you Friday!!! Bonnie |
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