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Eventide Sonata |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Tis Eventide When waning setting sun descends, doth fullest golden moon arise. Imaginings take starry flight, with moonglow dreams of lovers dawn. So here in these imagined dreams, a Sonata of the heart is sung, to one who knows not how he's loved. Secretly in Eventide, I can tell him so. Tis then a kiss, combined of tears, that flow of joy at last as one. For these two in their middle days, have now just found soulmate true, and know a love as not before. Pray God this dream may soon arise, as Eventides sweet song becomes, a duet Sonata sung as one. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Ellie..once again you have written a lovely one. A joy to read.. Love Jos Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awww was sorry when I came to the end, I wanted more lovely piece. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Ellie. The longing of the heart comes through beautifully! |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ellie, this was so beautiful and haunting, such a joy to read. -wordancer "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Ellie, this is indeed beautiful, as I have already told you. Promise I'll get in here and do more soon. Miss you guys, too. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Ellie, sigh, this is beautiful. Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah, this pulls the heartstrings Ellie, a hauntingly beautiful piece indeed. See you Friday!!! Bonnie |
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