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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Lullaby I know a little love song my Mama used to sing. She would sing it for the babies and rock them off to sleep. Just a little lullaby with story meant to grow. A baby born in Bethlehem many years ago. A simple little love song into us all she poured. Her voice so full of love in worship to our Lord. Song about a special boy who puzzled those around. A song about a young man leaving His hometown. Simple song of beauty about the loving Lamb. She always had a tear then for the broken man. She cried as she smiled she loved the stories end. How the living Son of Man returns to us again. I‘ll always see my Mama as she sang her song. How I long to hear her since she has been gone. I sing a little lullaby my Mama sang to me. Her tears are in my eyes as I sing to my baby. Oh Lord I know a love song my Mama used to sing. Now planted in a new heart my son drifts off to sleep. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I haven't read you for a long time....so today, I'm very glad I found this....for it likes me, quite a bit! Hello you! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I like the sweetness and tenderness of this. Thanks for sharing. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so lovely..thank you for letting us see what a tender heart you have. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore |
this is really beautiful and sweet... god bless u and ur child, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ I love the softness in this piece. Precious memories waft to mind - hoping that my own children always remember the lullabies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Great poem, the world needs more Daddys like you. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
a million thanks to y'all! really appreciate the imput! Been in the studio working on this and it is going to be very nice. Recording it with just a heartbeat drum tract and alittle soothing srings and an almost whispered vocal tract... difficult to record cause it keeps putting us all to sleep...lol thanks again love ya! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Love it! Captured me from the start! Good job! *thanx*   mYsTiC |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I remember my mama singing songs like that, too. God bless you. Melton |
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TrampPoet New Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 2 |
thank you all for the imput and comments! I wanted to reply to this so everyone could see that bleeding has gone away and TrampPoet has emerged... just trying to consolidate some of my random personalities... love y'all Tramp "tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" the artist formerly known as "bleeding" now simply TrampPoet |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
not only do I like the new handle but, the poem is great! nicely done my friend.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
awww I loved this  When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Daniel! Very lovely! What a treasured and priceless memory! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hi..may I have your ok to put this in a future issue of the newsletter? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Her tears are in my eyes very sweet, I loved it ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank you all greatly! It took a certain amount of courage to wade past my critique statement and I appreciate each of you! gratefully, the artist once upon... known as "bleeding" |
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