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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere ![]() |
Hearing your voice Speaking your name Not seeing you around Causes bitter-sweet pain Reaching out for you Your no longer near Loneliness creeps in Blink back a tear Looking at the calender Still counting every hour One day circled in red Stands out like a tower Soon to be re-united Friends together at last Then this heart-broken sorrow Will be a thing of the past *Hee Hee* ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... [This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is so lovely! Wonderfully written, it flows so well. ....beth |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
I could feel the sadness you exhibit through this poem, having friends to lean on whether right next door or online can make one feel much happier. I hope the days pass quickly for you so that you are reunited with those special people. ![]() |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Nice read...thank you JB Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Well BWA, I'm glad you're on your way back to us...I was beginning to worry about you! ![]() ~~Jamie ![]() ![]() I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* spins round on his barstool happily...* No worries hun..you can have it back ..I is just keepin it warm for ya *G* Sol ![]() ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Loved this ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is sweet, BWA! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Like the rest, I am counting the days until you're return. :-) Nice one, sweetie. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this put a smile on my face..i do agree with you...we always snatch every opportunity to spend time here with our loved ones at passions, don't we.... you take care and i will be waiting for your return too ![]() |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Just wanted to say I liked this work! Don't worry, time flies, and we're not going anywhere. ![]() |
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