The Corner Pub |
Can't Wait Till "One Sweet Day" Gets Here... |
Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Hearing your voice Speaking your name Not seeing you around Causes bitter-sweet pain Reaching out for you Your no longer near Loneliness creeps in Blink back a tear Looking at the calender Still counting every hour One day circled in red Stands out like a tower Soon to be re-united Friends together at last Then this heart-broken sorrow Will be a thing of the past *Hee Hee* I couldn't resist... Though not quite marked on the calender, I'm still counting the days until I'll be able to chat with all of my on-line friends again. Until then I miss all of you and your in my thoughts and prayers...Take care. Always, Me. BWA Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... [This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is so lovely! Wonderfully written, it flows so well. ....beth |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
I could feel the sadness you exhibit through this poem, having friends to lean on whether right next door or online can make one feel much happier. I hope the days pass quickly for you so that you are reunited with those special people. |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Nice read...thank you JB Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Well BWA, I'm glad you're on your way back to us...I was beginning to worry about you! Anyways, I shall await your return and hold a seat at the Pub's Bar for ya! hehehehe ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* spins round on his barstool happily...* No worries hun..you can have it back ..I is just keepin it warm for ya *G* Sol ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Loved this Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is sweet, BWA! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Like the rest, I am counting the days until you're return. :-) Nice one, sweetie. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this put a smile on my face..i do agree with you...we always snatch every opportunity to spend time here with our loved ones at passions, don't we.... you take care and i will be waiting for your return too |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Just wanted to say I liked this work! Don't worry, time flies, and we're not going anywhere. |
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