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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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The night descends a dark blanket invading languid thoughts casting long shadows in the fading light shadows which reach into the mind like tentacles magnifying the loneliness The absence of one so dear to the faltering spirit presses deeply without respite into the dark recesses of a damaged soul the long eventless days drone on into insufferable night This pain a stranger to relief like a sharp knife inflicts innumerable tiny wounds on a damaged heart each slow beat fainter than the last thumps a lonely message on the heavy night air miss you... need you... want you... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Phew lonely lonely lonely.............nice writing Pegasus.......very lonely. Jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
can't tell you how many night i've had like that, but I like the way you've done it  There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus; My heart feels this loneliness for you. I pray that all turns out well, hopefully your prayers and dreams will come true! Nothing is impossible with God! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
A song for everyone who has ever suffered a broken heart, which I suppose is nearly all of us. It hits pretty close to home, which is to say, well done. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thank you my friends for the kind words. there may be some light at the end of the tunnel(finally). the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote: No matter how faint the distant echoes are, they are heard, as they reverberate through the soul of the one who listens... [This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
pegasus, this brings a tear to my eye....soooo very touching. ~hugs~ ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Chanson..thanks for the hug..you are very kind Lady..I am so glad you decided to check out this forum.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...this was as I remember... |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Pegasus..the heart is the doorway to the soul..it is said..loneliness can be very cruel sometimes. "Miss you, need you, want you"...echoes from the past to many. Your heart was poured out in this poem....and I, for one, can relate...beautiful, but sad....Twilah |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
It's worth a second look I can tell you Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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kismetkelsey Junior Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 32Canada |
A lonesome poem but one that I am sure a lot of us can relate to.I have had visits from the night spectors of loneliness too.I was very moved by this poignant poem.I 'll be reading more of your work. |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Lost and lonely...A sad piece here, Pegasus...Beautifully written, I know I'm echoing whats been said, but thought my own two cents would hold some value at any rate. |
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