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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
What once was... you I put trust in, Now were two strangers, What once were dreams, What once was... My ideal future, Now is so different, What once were dreams, What once was... My dream house, Now is more modern, What once were dreams, What once was... Me quiet and reluctant, Now ready for anything, What once were dreams. The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Dreams sometimes don't measure up to reality, do they? An interesting, thought-provoking poem, Maria. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Marilyn - yep and they can change, thanks  The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what once was can never be again..I am constantly told  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May your new dreams become your reality. Nice writing, Moon Dust. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Moon Dust, This is so true. I enjoyed your poetic view. Melton |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
 Truly enjoyed this one moon dust...mostly because I spend a lot of time dreaming! ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wynter - yeah, its horrible when your not ready for change, thanks tho Lone Wolf - thanks your very kind Melton - thank you Jamie - You too? thanks.Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is the first of your poems I've had the chance to read, I believe. Very well written. I'll be looking for more by you in the future.  BWA.Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... [This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
BWA - Thanks, will do. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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