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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
The web of deceit that you have woven has begun steadily to unravel during the aftermath of seperation. How could you possibly think to gain, when you dealt out a house of cards, based on a foundation that leaks from the many holes of falseness? Did you perceive me of idle mind? Unwilling or unable to view your words and deeds with clarity? Oh little player, you didn't realize that lies become entangled, one into another until they burst forth, overflowing; spilling onto the ground at my feet. Yoiu depended on your lies to win. Now you sit alone, trying to warm yourself in the sunless shadow of your mountain of deceit. I pity you, hungry little wolf. Is this the prize you sought?? [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Childomine! I like this very much! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Great display of emotion...almost makes me feel the same way about whoever this was. You put a lot into your poetry, child! This poem's great, like all your others!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Never has the unfaithful been told so elgently to go to hell. I like this. bill |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Child - Sounds like you've been through the mill. I understand the feeling in this so very well. Well written, as always. Sheila |
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