»
Archives
»
The Corner Pub
»
Wintered Memories
| The Corner Pub |
|
Wintered Memories |
|
|
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
|
Things to Remember Memories in Haiku wintered air breathed in nervous glances pass between just before lips meet iridescence drawn by winter raindrops flowing or perhaps by tears such a cold damp day and then a warm winter night lives of irony open road ahead under threatening winter sky we must say good-bye Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Jamie Patterson - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I liked this Jamie..very nice flow..tough to say goodby though. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
||
|
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Lovely haiku, but I have to agree about not liking goodbyes. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Jaimie, Very nice writing here PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
||
|
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks - and yes-- good-byes are even harder than those really tough I'm sorries... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
These are lovely. I'm going to put them in my library and if you would allow, I'd like to put them in the newsletter - or if you have a few other favorites, please let me know. Thank you! |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
No words...no words for these dear. You already know what I think yes? K ...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
||
|
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Whatever you wish Sharon....glad you think they are good.. K- I think so  Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
library thing as usual.. |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, these Haiku's are heavenly m'friend. Excellent as always m'dear. enjoyed Maree I may know the word, but not say it I may know the truth, but not face it I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head, indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-03-2001).] |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
soft eyes giving warmth loving hearts lying open melancholy shed |
||
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love these, but esspecially like the last one, Nice work. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
||
|
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Belated Thanks!-- sorry for the long time it took... There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
||
|
Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
beautiful Jamie.. haiku is so perfect for this poem! mm, this is simply beautiful, and gave me just the feeling I have, when I have to say good bye to someone I love/care about.. well done “One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
