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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
on pins and needles her life has been made too sharp to relax too painful to relay the truth of this existance dwells deep as if to say it has never truly happened her life wasnt hers anyway she sits on pins and needles uncomfortable at best must be too much to expect anything more or to beg for anything less.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Mistyrose, I loved this, so much said in so few words. Excellent! Maree  |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
great poem. i enjoyed it much, and perhaps can somewhat relate. keep posting these fine works. ~DreamChild~ |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
i wrote this i posted it risky business for me thanks so much for your encouragement and kind words i know nothing of form and free flowing, etc. i just write so thank you sincerely mistyrose~* |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I hope you find yourself in a more comfortable situation soon! I could feel a certain nervousness seeping from the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
I know not of classic or proven form, only what sounds good to me when i write it or read it. And i like this poem very much, a strong impression made with few words....my favorite thing. This is the first i have read from you, but i will watch for more. Ryan One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hey this is a good idea.. perfect comparison, and well expressed emotions.. I like it.. “One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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