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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
You have been me Have helped me breathe My soul You eased the pain While I wasn't sane My pavillion You comforted my loss Without being my boss My chocolate You picked me up Helped fill my cup My coffee You dried my tears Washed away the years My raindrops You heard my voice I had no choice My microphone You held me tight Warmth in the night My blanket You opened my eyes Ridded life of lies My truth You kissed my lips Made uneasiness slip My passion You gave me hope Taught me to cope My rehab You made me sing More than a fling My voice You taught me how 'Til years from now My teacher You were my life End to my strife My everything |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
sorry I haven't been here in a while. I've been going back and forth from my home, in oblivion, to my sister's in dallas. it's been a really long month for both of us. by the way, how was everyone's Valentine's day? Alicia |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I liked this one a lot..hope things are working out for you. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I love this one Alicia. I think it's one of the most positive things I have seen from you. I am happy for you and whoever or whatever your everything is. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
lovely poem of togetherness! caring from the heart, I love it! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
That certainly does sound like everything you need.  I'd settle for just the chocolate. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Alicia... Still waiting for MY everything .....But if that's what I have to look forward to...it's worth it..great job!Best |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow.. this is quite strong! If you're looking for 'potency', yeah, I think u found it.. a bold poem.. absolutely beautiful.. it's.. well, it's everything.. I loved this blackhalo.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Thanx all! All I can say is,... "SHE'S BACK!!!" (my muse, that is...)  Alicia |
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