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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-02-15 12:14 PM



You have been me
Have helped me breathe
My soul

You eased the pain
While I wasn't sane
My pavillion

You comforted my loss
Without being my boss
My chocolate

You picked me up
Helped fill my cup
My coffee

You dried my tears
Washed away the years
My raindrops

You heard my voice
I had no choice
My microphone

You held me tight
Warmth in the night
My blanket

You opened my eyes
Ridded life of lies
My truth

You kissed my lips
Made uneasiness slip
My passion

You gave me hope
Taught me to cope
My rehab

You made me sing
More than a fling
My voice

You taught me how
'Til years from now
My teacher

You were my life
End to my strife
My everything

© Copyright 2001 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2001-02-15 12:18 PM


sorry I haven't been here in a while. I've been going back and forth from my home, in oblivion, to my sister's in dallas. it's been a really long month for both of us. by the way, how was everyone's Valentine's day?
Alicia

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-02-15 12:39 PM


I liked this one a lot..hope things are working out for you.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
3 posted 2001-02-15 03:31 PM


I love this one Alicia. I think it's one of the most positive things I have seen from you. I am happy for you and whoever or whatever your everything is.


May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2001-02-15 05:50 PM


lovely poem of togetherness! caring from the heart, I love it!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2001-02-15 11:46 PM


That certainly does sound like everything you need. I'd settle for just the chocolate.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
6 posted 2001-02-19 02:24 PM


Alicia...

Still waiting for MY everything .....But if that's what I have to look forward to...it's worth it..great job!

Best

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2001-02-21 12:44 PM


Wow.. this is quite strong! If you're looking for 'potency', yeah, I think u found it.. a bold poem.. absolutely beautiful.. it's.. well, it's everything.. I loved this blackhalo..


Luv,
Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
8 posted 2001-02-21 12:30 PM


Thanx all! All I can say is,... "SHE'S BACK!!!" (my muse, that is...)
Alicia

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