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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
a book of promise... you, with a candle... paper-thin words close to the flame you shadowed each line with vague emotions camouflaged doubts with flickering feelings carelessly turning you breezed through answers igniting the secret that hid between covers and truth, by degrees burned its way outward till the story of us was beyond recognition |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, NC, and well written! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How sad, but well-written! I look forward to seeing more of your work. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
excellent post..yes, I to am looking forward to more..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
beautiful poem...so sad A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Heartfelt words written with good imagery. Excellent!  Deb |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
thanks guys...i appreciate your taking the time to read and thank you all for such kind comments! |
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