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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2001-02-14 11:40 AM


Crazy language filled with words
They give me no end of grief
Searching for just the right ones
To say to my Angel of Mischief

Words to let me say to her
Just what is in my heart
Feelings indefinable
By any words I know

I feel so helpless to explain
What it is I’m trying to say
I only hope she can understand
What I want to tell her today

Keith Wesley Mullin

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

© Copyright 2001 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-02-14 03:22 PM


Sometimes the simpliest words are all you have to say
Let her read your poem, she'll know what is in your heart.

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-02-14 05:38 PM


I hate it when that happens..worst feeling in the world is to go blank at important times..nice read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
3 posted 2001-02-14 06:16 PM


mmm... beautiful Keith. I think I understand, because i can feel the same way. enjoyed it much.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2001-02-14 06:16 PM


All you need say are those three little words!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2001-02-14 06:44 PM


Actions speak louder than words-
Flowers & candy may be a start,
To give her a chance to know just what
You're feeling in your heart!

The Language of Love tho' sometimes awkward,
finds a way to communicate it's true feelings!

Wonderful poem,
David


No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
6 posted 2001-02-14 08:09 PM


Sometimes when it seems hardest to find the words, you just let your heart do the talking, and it will be understood. And it looks as if that's already happened here.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2001-02-15 12:06 PM


I'm sure she'll understand, Keith! This is so cute - exceeding the limit of just Valentines Day..... I love 'Angel of Mischief'....speaks volumes!
Lary

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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
8 posted 2001-02-15 03:31 PM


Nicely done here. I liked this a lot.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
9 posted 2001-02-19 01:50 PM


Wes....

Just tell her what's in your heart...how could she resist?

Best

NC
Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89

10 posted 2001-02-20 08:55 PM


give her your poem

it says it all...

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