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wordancer
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0 posted 2001-02-02 03:36 PM


beat, beat, beat
under old floor boards. . .
ticks a heart



redrum
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"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."



[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 02-02-2001).]

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pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-02-02 04:49 PM


scary sounds commin' fum the basement ya'll.
lol...nice one dear.

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Romy
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2 posted 2001-02-02 05:00 PM


Hahahahaha! Loved it!
ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2001-02-02 05:36 PM


ooooo, scary, but verrry cleverly done!

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4 posted 2001-02-02 08:07 PM


I think it's sweet

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kcsgrandma
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5 posted 2001-02-03 01:10 AM


LOL  I wondered what a Poe Valentine would be.  Never thought of this one.     Cute!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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6 posted 2001-02-03 01:49 PM


Kinda scary if you ask me!



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Songbird
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7 posted 2001-02-04 01:29 AM


Sounds like a haunted house to me!
wordancer
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8 posted 2001-02-04 02:36 PM


Thanks for you replies....I do not know what possess me on this one, the ravens...the ravens are knocking at my door...  LOL, methinks a touch of Poe-ist.

WO

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Mr. Nice112
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9 posted 2001-02-05 12:35 PM


Wordancer, i was always told if u can't make a poem , take someone leses and go out strong... POE would have loved it.. even thoughhe would have wanted it to hellish.. nice twist!!! sign of a good poet.

All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

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