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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
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Clio, MI , United We Stand

0 posted 2001-01-10 08:51 AM


Wishes are like raindrops,
They fall down from the sky.
We try to catch them in our hands,
But, still they pass us by.

Wishes are like snowflakes,
No two are the same.
Each one is clearly special,
Engraved on it, a name.

Wishes are like the stars above,
There are millions all around.
We don't always see them,
'Cuz they hide among the clouds.

Wishes are like love songs,
Right from the very start,
They reach down deep inside your soul,
And touch you in your heart.


© Copyright 2001 Ranea Ratza - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2001-01-10 02:49 PM


Lovely poem, bestgirl.  Wishes are so magical.

Joy

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2001-01-10 07:28 PM


Beautiful words bestgirl.. You are an optimist, aren't you?! *_^ Just beautiful.. I love reading your poetry, always leaves a shine in my heart..

Love,
Lynne

bestgirl911
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3 posted 2001-01-11 11:22 AM


Joy...
Yes, wishes are so very magical..even more than we realize. Thank you.

Lynne...
Your comment really touched my heart. Thank you, I'm glad to know that it has such a wonderful effect on your heart.

Best


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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-01-12 12:24 PM


Wishes are like snowflakes,
                                             No two are the same.
                                           Each one is clearly special,
                                            Engraved on it, a name.
___________________________________

I had to read this several times to decide which part I liked best.   There's a lot of insight in this poem.  May all your wishes come true.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

bestgirl911
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Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-01-12 09:26 AM


Marilyn...
I feel honored that you liked it enough to read it "several times"...lol. I thank you for always taking the time to say such nice things. May The stars shine down on you and may all your wishes come true.

Ranea


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