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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-01-06 10:30 AM


After eight when the silence prevails
Lovers embrace and passion avails
Kisses fall sweet on a dampened brow
Welcoming a treasure only lovers endow
Oh come to me my passion of the night
For the hour of eight is within our sight
And take me on a journey of lustful wonder
Where hearts collide in crashes of thunder
Surround me, for your touch i can't deny
Awaken me from  slumber till dawn is nigh
          


© Copyright 2001 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
1 posted 2001-01-06 10:44 AM


this pome is lovly and has a grate flow
thanks for the read


I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-01-06 10:47 AM


Suzanne; I love the romantic and passionate beauty you've so poetically expressed here. A perfect way to warm a winters night! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-01-06 11:26 PM


yes..definately a winter warmer..!

very passionate write, suzanne  

hugs, g

"sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....."
-kathleen vibbert



pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2001-01-07 04:05 AM


mmm..mmm..good!! lit my fire.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


shira
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since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
5 posted 2001-01-07 05:34 AM


So sweet, so warm.. very very nice and loving. I really like this. Nice read!
Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-01-07 07:27 PM


Thank you all so very much. Surprising what ya write about when you are sick with the flu and eating chocolates  lol .I guess i needed to be warmed up too.  Take care All   Suzanne

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-01-08 06:23 AM


Oh the passion just oozes from this beautiful poem, I loved it! and it flows nicely  
oh and I hope you feel better real soon  

Maree < !signature-->

I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-08-2001).]

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