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After Eight |
Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
After eight when the silence prevails Lovers embrace and passion avails Kisses fall sweet on a dampened brow Welcoming a treasure only lovers endow Oh come to me my passion of the night For the hour of eight is within our sight And take me on a journey of lustful wonder Where hearts collide in crashes of thunder Surround me, for your touch i can't deny Awaken me from slumber till dawn is nigh |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
this pome is lovly and has a grate flow thanks for the read I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Suzanne; I love the romantic and passionate beauty you've so poetically expressed here. A perfect way to warm a winters night! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes..definately a winter warmer..! very passionate write, suzanne hugs, g "sometimes a closed door provides us with walls to lean on....." -kathleen vibbert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
mmm..mmm..good!! lit my fire. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
So sweet, so warm.. very very nice and loving. I really like this. Nice read! |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you all so very much. Surprising what ya write about when you are sick with the flu and eating chocolates lol .I guess i needed to be warmed up too. Take care All Suzanne |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh the passion just oozes from this beautiful poem, I loved it! and it flows nicely oh and I hope you feel better real soon Maree < !signature--> I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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