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JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-12-31 03:20 PM

Snow dots hold my eyes
The dainty lashes pull back
White pulses collide
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Bark layers peel slow
Uncovering secret souls
Twigs snapped off once born
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Macrame forest
Braided moss for chickadee
dee dee in the wood

Hope you enjoyed reading those haikus. How was everyone's Holiday Season? I know it's not quite over yet, but today is New Years Eve so I thought what the heck!

Joy

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-12-31 03:36 PM

Joy; These are exquisite Haiku. There is depth and meanig here. I had to reread them a few times and each time I discovered something new. Wonderful! Happy New Yeaer! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2000-12-31 03:40 PM

Ah well done Joy ! Well done !! Happy New Year to ya !

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-12-31 04:14 PM

They are lovely, Joy! So are you! Nice to finally see you!

Denise

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-12-31 04:53 PM

Beautiful!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2000-12-31 11:25 PM

I liked all of these, but especially the third. The chickadee has always been a favorite of mine.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2001-01-01 05:52 AM

I liked these a lot Joy..very nice work..

)

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

7 posted 2001-01-01 10:24 AM

Thanks everyone!

Joy

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2001-01-02 05:29 PM

njoyed the lovely haikus.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

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