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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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willingly showing me the ropes, never a harsh word or glare, you patiently laded me with tips to fly your paper plane well, entrusting me the key to your inner world while showing me more respect than most i was flattered i listened attentively, trying my darnest to absorb all that you said, not wishing to appear nonchalant i flew your plane you had taught me well you cheered, your face lit up like a candle, even gamely embracing me enveloped in your warmth, i sure didnt deserve that hug but it felt sooo good and thank you for making my day [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Awwww..this is so cool..isn't it neat to bond with a child?..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It sounds as if you learned more than how to fly a paper plane. Nice job.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Kaile: I agree with kcsgrandma here. A wonderful piece expressing all you have for the child. Wonderful! I loved it! ~~Jamie   "Who does not love the Titanic? ...We all go: only a few, first-class." --David R. Slavitt, 1983 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo sweet, Kaile! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Aren't kids wondrous creatures?  Well done kaile ! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was amazing. I liked it I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; This was enchanting...Amazing how little children can teach us the most about love...Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh... This is such a sweet and warm piece. I love kids, and I like the way they place their trust in you. You know, the way they just place their hand in yours for you to lead them across a street. That's just so sweet... And I think you captured that in your poem _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
That's beautiful! Hehe, I wish people stayed like that when they grew up.. now that really would be great..It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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