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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Take my hand and let me show you what life can be Let me remove the mask from your eyes and help you to see You've been walking around in darkness for far too long Your voice has been stifled, preventing your lovely song I may not be perfect, but there's one thing I know With my love I can help your wounded heart grow Help it to grow and tear down the walls of hurt and pain Give it strength and life, helping it to beat once again So gentle heart I yearn to see your heart, your true self To find that to me would be a prize beyond all worth I know that there dwells a kind heart, gentle and true And I also know that it indeed dwells inside of you --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Nicely written, I hope you find that special someone.  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahh...beautiful poem Sven. Love it ! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, what a beautiful poem full of hope. I'm sure knowing my situation as you do, you will understand why this poem just speaks volumes for me, if only a man could say that to me, that is what I have been waiting for all theses years. So understand why this poem is just beautiful to me and so well expressed. This is amazing! All hail Sven, king of romance Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Geat poem. I want to wish you the best of luck with the lass sounds like you may have a tough task. With your words I'm sure you'll pass the test of love to her heart. Good luck to you from the start. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, This was very sweet and touching my friend. I think most of us have a kind gentle heart dwelling inside. Sometimes we just have to find it. Wonderful writing . . . Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
A beautiful and healing emotion love can be. Believe me, I know. --Venus Macleod |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sven, This is a beautiful touching poem. How tenderly your pen glides 'cross the paper! Dennis :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sven! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . your replies do mean a lot to me. . . ------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a very beautiful sentiment for sure. We all search for that special one and hope we can show them something they have longed to find and see. Very nicely worded and said Sven. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is lovely Sven. We all have the power within us to reach out and heal each others hurts and help reveal the inner loveliness. You have expressed this so beautifully. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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