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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA ![]() |
If I could fly, my love I would wing to you, down to the southern seas, on a storm front of emotions to crash through your dark skies. Listen to the thunder; the frantic beats of my wings as closer and closer I soar, riding high through the clouds, with a turbulent passion to find the one who calls me from afar. A flash of brilliant light blinds you to my arrival, I am here! Do you not see me? It is I, the storm of our love that you called into being. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
powerful emotions riding this storm..nice ones, though..yes, I feel you. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
UP! cause it's too soon for this storm to move on.. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Ooooh I do like this one!!! "It is I, the storm of our love that you called into being." Strong stuff!! "Work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt and, dance like no one is watching." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, Wordancer, The passionate analogy in this poem of love's deep longing has left me all a quiver! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is so beautiful and intimate, I have been reluctant to intrude with a reply, but I do love it. ![]() To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
oh kscgrandma, you are not intruding, if I had something that I didn't want to share will all my friends here, I would not post it. I do thank-you for your lovely response. childomine & ellie, thanks for your wonderful replies peg, (hugs) < !signature--> "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
EXCELLENT!!!! This brought me to the edge of the Storm!! Its been a while since I have lingered in the PUB..I am glad in deed to see that the old ways live on!! Sol ![]() |
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