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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA ![]() |
Disappointment and doubt encumbered me When a man with true charm was met His humor and wit has made me see, That time can soothe regret . . . He walks with a tall and sturdy gate, the fleetness of foot is apparent A lover of life, he cares not of fate, And question him of this, I daren't . . . Freedom and fancy is what he seeks Music plays his emotions precise From a guitar, mystic melodie leaks, His passion in song does entice . . . So wise beyond his timid cloak Of sarcasm and buffoonery When his eyes do twinkle while telling a joke I can't help but be merry . . . Whatever the pains of his past He does not dwell upon them Sorrow never seems to last Which makes him the rarest jem . . . I await my cowardess to part And tell him how much he's treasured But my bashful self can never start, I'm afraid merit can't be measured . . . Yes, our paths did cross quite mystically, Yet, of this, I do rejoice Though I travel through life unsteadily He has given my heart a voice . . . -------------------------------- Actually, I wrote this one a few years ago about a man who had stolen my heart. A little update, he proposed to me this past Thanksgiving and we are due to be wed in May 2001. Funny how a little poem saw it all two years ago... ![]() ![]() Hope you enjoy! --Jamie "Who does not love the Titanic? ...We all go: only a few, first-class." --David R. Slavitt, 1983 |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what a lovely read..and the news at the end really made me smile..congratulations.. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Wikket... Very nice. Congratulations on the wedding. Best |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
pegasus: Thank you... ![]() bestgirl: Thank you for the Congrats...two years is a lot of waiting. All I have to say is, I guess patience is a virtue (although I still hate the waiting part)! ![]() ~~Jamie "Who does not love the Titanic? ...We all go: only a few, first-class." --David R. Slavitt, 1983 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderfully expressed and I love the last line "he has given my heart a voice." Congratulations on finding the "knight of (your) heart" Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
What a wonderful poem and a true love story for A Christmas gift to us all here....I too wish you happiness and Love and much blessings. ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh i am so happy for you.That is a wonderful poem.Best of luck for your future Suzanne |
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