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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Hot eyes and cool sea Summer has finally arrived I think, albeit the tilt of this earth has proven otherwise air feels right and the ocean with her streaks of baby blue curve with the pull of North and South land is like Saturn and the sea her rings, within them small vessels resemble dust, particles shining from sun’s reflection, sending what seems to be Morse code blinding my stare heads grin wide from the bounce of Pacific’s knee, childlike we are, once in her arms waiting, waiting for her push her withdrawal, the rush of being hurled into her, shattering the glass-like waves only to emerge cut and bruised but alive still this moment, a never ending picture, a liquid meeting of hot eyes and cool sea Dark Angel Dec 2000 "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
It is only right that someone like you who writes so beautifully have a view such as the one you describe. Love it as usual dear. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow this is so pretty,really liked it!! sam "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
heads grin wide from the bounce of Pacific’s knee, childlike we are, once in her arms waiting, waiting for her push her withdrawal, the rush of being hurled into her, shattering the glass-like waves only to emerge cut and bruised but alive still yes, I can almost see and feel your words...a friend told me it has been very hot there this week...stay cool...send some warmth this way..oh I think you did, in your words huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
through the eyes of a poet very nice nice one Miss Maree |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
May I say Baby Roo that this is my most FAVOURITE of yours so far. Absolutely 100% Especially with 'shattering' there - much better. This has that raw hurt feel that I so love in poetry - litle miss melancholic that I am. Hugs and well done dear (L)(K) bat  K |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Doing the library thing... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
very beautiful images, wonderful poem. this moment, a never ending picture, a liquid meeting of hot eyes and cool sea "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, you are always sweet with your replies actually you are always sweet I thank you so much Hey sam, glad you liked it Thank you!Nakdthoughts, Thanks so much for your lovely reply HOT?? hehe, more like scorching, lol and you can have it all, I fed up with it already lol Thanks Hon.hey Walty, thank you my friend yuh!Tiggerrrrrr, YAY BOUNCE!!! Do I remind you of someone? lol Thank you hon, and if this is your most FAVOURITE, then I'm on top of the world! "raw hurt feel that I so love in poetry" I'll rem that hugs (L)(K)bat Brian, thank you kindly for your lovely reply Thank you all very much! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
oh, how beautiful! Warming to my heart here in this cold winter are your wonderful poetic words! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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