navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » beauty in pain
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic beauty in pain Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-12-19 12:34 PM


Learn to see the beauty in the pain
Like seeing the sun threw the rain

Smile past the tears
Its time to let go the old fears

Let love fill your heart
Before this pain tears it apart

Life will never be fair
We all have our crosses to bare

But remember that the sun shines to
And that I am here thinking of you

Give love a chance to grow
Then maybe happiness will begin to flow

Replace your hate
Open the gate

It is time to change
Forget the useless rage

Let your heart be free from its cage
Time now to turn the page



I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

© Copyright 2000 Amberlyn - All Rights Reserved
shira
Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88
Hamburg, PA
1 posted 2000-12-19 01:06 PM


An interesting view... we always shoud remember to see the good side of things.
kindasorta
Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56

2 posted 2000-12-19 01:27 PM




Wisdom used sparingly, somewhat vague
within the reason of this rhyme.

Pain pronounced with tears from my heart
seen as rain in the midst of sunshine by you.
You can't see the rain,the blaim,your storm?
Ignorance void of truth, storm brought the rain.

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-12-19 03:39 PM


I especially like the last four couplets..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
4 posted 2000-12-19 11:18 PM


Shira thank you for reading

Kindasorta i liked what you wrote is there more to it?

Peg111 thanks they are my fav to



I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » beauty in pain

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary