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Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-12-19 01:13 AM

Complication ...
           is what you are
              in my life like a shooting star
                     never knowing where we're going
                          look outside is it snowing
Destruction ...
          in slow motion
               now it's ending, that's my notion
                   and I don't know why
                         but its in your eyes
                             nothing left to do but sit and cry
                     Always ending,
                             I'm left reeling
                                     Trying hard to stop these feelings
                              And it doesn't work, though it should
                          Wouldn't stop it if I could
Still you complicate me
          Without trying
              Can not breathe now am I dying
                  Feel the door close with a bang
                      Can not stop this heart in pain

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

1 posted 2000-12-19 02:12 AM

Wonderful format and flow tis a sad day for all to know. The pain of a broken heart may all heal from its part.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2000-12-19 08:43 AM

a very strong piece, Angel..and I especially liked the style..well done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2000-12-19 09:16 AM

Very nicely done, Angel. This style suits you, I think.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

shira
Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 88
Hamburg, PA

4 posted 2000-12-19 12:51 PM

This is very nice, but sad in a way.. or frustrating. Emotional. All of that. I liked it.

raleighbttrfly
Member

since 2000-11-21

Posts 160
Raleigh NC

5 posted 2000-12-19 11:32 PM

you mach the visual efect with the flow of your words nicely done.

I can relay identify with this one *sigh*

I am not always lonely even if I am always alone

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